Passages for Comment

B. 1) It definitely gives me a clear trace of the weather conditions. In london it was really misty/foggy, unless as she tardily left london behind it started to cut polish out and patches of blue Rosamond Lehman expends many of the fabric metaphors so we get to see how the mist looks, which is in turn, describes the mist/fog much better. Lentil, orange yellow crocus and fawn left behind. The reciprocations Lentil, saffron and fawn are all embr suffer, orangy earthy colours describing capital of the United Kingdom as she leaves it behind. London is all rattling built up and the the buildings are all very br declare and dreary (linking back to lentil) but consequently the woollen day clarified , the word woollen describes the mist/fog as wool which is a fabric that you cannot see through.The phrase, flood indigo muslin. Muslin is a very bluff type of fabric, so the mist looks very see-through . This fabric indicates a lightness colour change and lifting mist outside . The skies formless stuff and nonsense began to quilt The skies amorphous material are the clouds, which are beginning to foreshorten out. The patches of blue in the sky which distinguish to the white clouds are indeed akin a quilt, with many patches here and there.2) It could too be describing the condition she is in and the dash in which she is ruling. She has just woken up and hear the bad intelligence activity, which has thrown her mind into overwind. The threatening mist/fog outside could recollect that she is seriously worried as she is weighed down with worry and concern. She is still half dozy and as she sees the billowing mist, this gives us a sort of foggy appearance of what she is feeling like (like some nonpareil who has just woken up and cant distinguish anything properly). The Muslin fabric is say us that her brain is not bouncing or sharp as she is looking, but not taking anything in. She is still in shock about the bad news and is still trying to wake up which further implies how she is feeling.C. 1) The sound and pace of the passing game is very quick and fast flowing. Ernest Hemingway uses primarily two syllable speech throughout, which adds to the already fast-flowing passage. This is springy in that the written report needs to be quick, so that the character in the tarradiddle can finish his book and so that we dont get bored with the story line.2) every(prenominal) you yield to do is write cardinal true article of faith I figure what Hemingway is saying is that all you need to do is to write a proper, structured sentence in order to get your story flowing again. A true sentence shows kinda of tells, uses the five senses, uses strong active verbs, does not repeat oneself, doesnt use unnecessary words and uses metaphors and word pictures. That is a true sentence in which Hemingway describes.3) I think that everyone has there own outlook on life, so we thereof all have incompatible opinions on what something think ofs. When Hemingway says that metaphorical language is ornamental, i have to agree with him, because it is a way of florescence up something and it makes people use their own mood. Thus, all the metaphors get out be will be completely different and mean other things to other people. I do associate transparent language to veracity because you dont have to use your own imagination as all the facts are there. It doesnt use any many metaphors as there is literally only one tier of depth to something. I dont think that metaphorical language gets between reality and the reader. alone people have different thoughts on the metaphors etc. So the outcome of one extract will be different to that off others.